Keep going but just add a little more details.
The story is great and I am super excited to read the updates.
And two, why not have the black birds tease him more about Bandit? Like have them show pictures to him of them stalking her and Lyn-z Or if your saying they have her andLinds,why not bring them in after having Gerard tied to the bed so he cabn only see his daughter and then they like leave the room with her and THEn start a torture.