I was a little miffed at first to find out you were writing Naruto fanfic instead of GW, but after reading this, I don't think I'll care very much. =) Very funny and entertaining, while still in character. It helps that I adore Kakashi, though. I've always really liked how IC you keep the characters.
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Thanks! If you know me from my GW days, you'll know that 'IC' is the highest order of compliment for me ^_^ Naruto - and 'One Piece', another huge favorite of mine - have their fun attractions too!