OMG THAT WAS AMAZING
FRICK YEAH- I'M AWESOME!
Ahem. Yes, I loved the update so much, you can really see you developing your writing style. I loved the cliff-hanger and the awkwardness of Gerard and the rest of the Way's.
Keep writing and don't feel the need to tell every little detail in time- jump if you have to ;)
xo
Author's response
I`m glad you like the chapter and your character. I`ll try to update soon, thanks for all the advice
xoxodakota