Glad you're putting more detail into the chapters - this story is really good but there was a point where it was getting a bit slow. Now the details gone back in it is a lot better :D Admittedly, I didn't read this properly --- it made me cringe and feel slightly sick --- but it's all really well written. I know you said in the last update that there might be a longer wait between chapters but if the quality and detail keeps up it should be worth the wait! Have to say, I feel slightly sadistic for enjoying it but hey-ho! It is a good story. And a familiar voice! The plot thickens. Update soon please XD
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