Review for The 'Home'

The 'Home'

(#) Vengefulscout 2011-09-17

OHHH! I LOVE THE PARANORMAL! Here's my audition!

Name (first and sir name: Emily Toye (I hate my sir name...)

Age:14

Looks:silver-blue eyes, long brown hair, 5'3, pale.

Personality:shy, quiet, kind and caring but can get angry easily and lash out at people who hurt her friends but cant stand up for herself

Why you live at the orphanage: Her parents were killed in a car accident when she was 6 so she lived with her uncle and older brother Kai. But one day, when she was 10, Kai and uncle were killed in mysterious circumstances when they went out to town and she was at a friends house. She has never found the truth how they died

how long you have been there:4 years

anything else (intrests fears alergies etc): can sing and play the piano but doesn't like to show anyone. Is scared of fire, knifes and the dark. Cries about her brother, mother and father at night or when she is alone.

Hope that's all ok! You can change anything if you'd like!
Happy Story Writing!