Review for The 'Home'

The 'Home'

(#) Ajay21 2011-09-17

Name (first and sir name):Abby Jones

Age:18 (obviously can be changed to whatever you need it to be)

Looks: 5"2 (yes, i'm shorter than Frank! :O!) eyes change from green to blue depending on my mood, have almost shoulder length purple hair. Multiple ear piercings, and a tattoo along my right ribs - some bars of music and 'i am not afraid' underneath it :)

Personality: Quite outgoing, good with meeting new people but do trust people way too easily. I'm quite rebellious to be honest and tend to be quite outspoken and just say what's on my mind :')

Why you live at the orphanage: Parents couldn't deal with the trouble she kept getting into, they never really cared very much so decided it'd be easier to get rid of her.

how long you have been there: Four years.

anything else (jntrests fears alergies etc): Interested in the supernatural (as cliche as that may be! (':), also learnt to play the drums from a young age and never leaves anywhere without her i-pod!

Hope this is alright, i'd love to be in your story! I'll still read it if im not as it seems like it's gonna be a good'un! Can't wait for it to be up! :) xo