Review for The 'Home'

The 'Home'

(#) fatherfuckingmeese 2011-09-17

Name: Mia Morissey
Age: 7 (you can change it if you'd like.)
Looks: Small (4"6), pale-skinned, has shoulder length black hair with side fringe and curls, and big navy blue eyes.
Personality: Shy at first, but once you get to know me I am very outgoing. Kind of quiet but it works to my advantage, because I am kind of sneaky and good at hiding. Very observant, and notices things about people. I look up to the older kids. Also very brave for my age.
Reason for being at orphanage: When I was three, I witnessed my mom and older brother get murdered by my father. Before that, my father abused me and my brother (Aaron) and he tried to protect me. The police came and took me away, but not before my father tried to drown me.
How long I've been here: 4 years.
Anything else: I look up to Gerard and Frank as brotherly figures when they arrive. I am very close to them. I am afraid of the dark and deep bodies of water. I often have nightmares.
thanks for your time, hopefully I can play a part in this, because it sounds very interesting. :) You can alter any of this information if you'd like. I am very excited to see what this will come out like.