haha i don't think he's trying to hurt people though, he's just a little paranoid trying not to get hurt but hey, he can't be perfect, physically he pretty much got it all lol personally i think vince is much more of a douche,the way you wrote him was freakin funny :p i'm really eager to read the sequel. i love the way you wrote nikki too.. :)
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The way is see it is Axl=douche and Vince=bitch/twat xD haha but I still love em both. I'm glad you like the way I wrote Nikki :) that was one of my main concerns because I made him kinda vulnerable which he never is xP I just thought I'd show a different side of him.