haha WOW! i really like this story!! especially the part bout Edward Cullen "He's a fuckin' fairy?!" tha part made me lol. I can't wait for the next part. You should read my story, One False Move. Probably not as good as yours, but I'd like to know what you think.
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Haha, thank you! :) I got the prompt for vampires and someone said something about Twilight so I had to add it in somewhere XD