Wow! I adore this story... It's utterly fantastic.
The detail is wonderful and I love how you explained everything he can do and why, or how it still affects him somewhat differently. I can't wait to read more!
I honestly don't have any criticism. I'm just basking in the brilliance of your writing. Thank you so much for posting this!
Author's response
Awww thank you so much :)
Its comments like that that make me love writing.
And you shall be reading more (hopefully) soon ^.^