Wow...this story is amazing!
There's this sort of wistful romantic tone to your writing that I find absolutely entrancing.
/He liked the harm in it all. There was something so pretty about it.
He didn't need anyone else when he had a romance between himself and self destruction./
Wow...it's so sad and so beautiful...
I find the whole story to be like this; sad and beautiful.
I can't wait to see where you plan to take this, the characters and their relationships, the plot, everything...you've got something really great on your hands here!
Please update soon!!!
Cheers!