omg this was amazing XD after i read it i noticed you wrote it and i was like "oh duh no wonder it was good CosmicZombie is a frerard writing boss" XD now go write some more on "Be my Detonator" thats like my fav frerard right now
Author's response
thank you :D aww, glad you like my stuff...am actually starting work on the next Be My Detonator chapter right now :D thank you so much for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo