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Characters?

(#) PartyPoison 2011-09-30

Going to make two just because I can. You don’t have to use either of them though.

Name: Alicia Nicholson (You can change the name. I was also thinking Samantha but I wasn‘t sure. You decide.)
Description: Wavy blond hair that frames a round face. Her bangs hang constantly in her face. Not very tanned because of the lack of sun exposure. Swirling green eyes that are easy to read and childlike. Fragile looking, skinny and weak. Often reminds people of a china doll with elegant, innocent looks. It seems as though she would break with only a small touch. Doesn’t talk much (at all) but hears almost everything that is said around her. Is smarter than people think but doesn’t like to show it. 5’7- Even though she is a bit tall her slight build and gentle nature make her seem small. Shy and skittish, doesn‘t like being the centre of attention or being touched. (Although finds it soothing when Seth holds her to calm her down.)
Gender: Female
Background: (Joint with Seth) Their mother had had them young and seemed more like their best friend then their mother. It was a childhood filled with laughter and smiles. She had always been surrounded by love. Seth has always been there for her, making sure that she was alright. When things got bad their mother had died, leaving the two siblings on their own to survive the chaos surrounding them.
Special abilities: She can make everything around her freeze, as though stuck in time. Usually when she is scared or nervous. It does not effect Seth though.
Age: I was thinking around 14/15 (can change)

Name: Cameron Nicholson
Description: A tangled mess of blond hair on top of his head. Scattered freckles and smooth skin matching that of his sister. Although his eyes are green they are darker, guarded heavily so no one knows what he is thinking or feeling. Medium build, lean and strong. 5’10
Gender- Male
Background: (Joint with Alicia) Grew up with a happy family. Is used to protecting Alicia ever since they were little. He was the older brother, the protector. It’s always been his job to make sure no harm came to her and is willing to do anything to make sure of it. His childhood was a good one, but he had to leave it behind when things turned for the worse and their mother was no longer there for them. Other than being a little overprotective he is an easy guy to get along with because of his friendly manner. Likes feeling useful and tries to do the best he can at everything.
Special Abilities: He may skip through time, but limited to twenty years (Not counting his life years) He may go twenty years back from the day he was born to twenty years into the future. He refuses to go any farther than a day into the future, too scared of what he might find. Is very adamant of this.
Age: 16-18 (Really you decide)

Can you kill them off?: Umm.. I guess so seeing as how it’s your story. But I would prefer if you didn’t. Although if you do use them and kill them in your story I will still read it and like it because I want to see this story all the way through to the end so do whatever you want with them.

Okaii, so there are my two characters. I went into a lot of detail because I currently have writers block for my story and have nothing else to do. If you can’t use them in any way then that is fine, the story is still amazing and I am anxious for the next chapter!