FicWad

After trying to read the first chapter, I sent you an edited copy of it, hoping you would see how it could look. Since you have not acknowledged my efforts, I can only assume you are not really serious about writing. That is too bad.

No one should feel that they cannot be creative. Trust me, I can write and I get that at home. So, you should continue to write, but you need to use all the tools at your disposal. Any craft worth undertaking is worth doing well. You cannot bake a cake without pans or flour; you cannot write stories without grammar basics and spelling skills. Get them and use them. Then people will be more responsive to your efforts.

And stop biting the hands that try to help you. That is just juvenile and makes us wonder if you really are six or seven.

I am all for allowing children to flex their wings and play with the adults, but if you are going to swim with the big fishes, you need to keep up. I for one do not tolerate children who interact with me acting like children. Try to use a little common sense and maturity. Or else go back to the playground and finish growing up. That may be harsh, but it is no harsher than your comments to those trying to help you. Name calling is for the immature and unimaginative. Continue in this mein and you only prove everyone's point.