That was so sweet and sad. I liked it, it was very different but I think you captured all of Julius's feelings exactly. In my opinion anyways.
I like the part where he's like "That's my biggest regret. The tombstone should read Delilah Chevalier, but I was too scared to ask her. I'm sure she would have said yes. A single tear rolls down my cheek and hits the white stone. I sigh. I'm 48, and I'll get older, but Delilah will forever be 23. The 25 year gap will grow bigger with each passing year."
That's the best part of the story in my opinion. Loved it. Write more. :D