Wow, Jenni, I'm blown away. Everything in this chapter is so unexpected, so intense and amazingly hot, too. I love your writing and I'm becoming quite addicted to it.
It never would have crossed my mind to have Melian and Celegorm together like this. At best, I'd have thought of Celegorm and Luthien. This story has surprised me in a very pleasant way and I hope there is more.