Wow your a fan of short chapters, huh? grins Just giving you a hard time, LOL. Very good chapter. I liked it- you had lots of emmotion, which to me is the key element of a story. You were very discripetive so we could almost see it. Great job! rates exciting
xxDarkness' Kidxx
PS- The first Grudge wasn't scary- I watched it then went to bed, lol. Did you see Scary Movie 4? They really made fun of the grudge, lol
Author's response
Yeah, well, I'm a whimp. "It" scared me, I don't do scary movies. Lol.