I absolutely loved this story. It was amazing. I've never been so into a fanfiction before. As for criticism I have none right now. Oh and I liked it when Zuko punched and dented the wall, and the ending was heartfelt and ties everything together. Thank you, and when I write some I would love if you could read and write back :]
Author's response
Thanks! ^^ If you give me a link I will check it out.