'Upside-Down
It's supposed to be for his own good, but Archie's pretty damn sure that having Herry hold him upside-down by the ankles over the edge of the dock isn't going to get him over his fear of water anytime soon.'
that was hilarious. You really got them well into character, and it was really funny to read. Learnt a couple of things too, which is always good:D
Author's response
Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it, and that you learned something from it (the show's such a great opportunity for it, and I wish more people would take advantage of that for their stories).