You've caught the most dreamlike and mystical aspects of all three of the characters in your beautiful piece. Really, the entire story has a chiascuro feel to it that really puts in me in mind of Samura-sensei's art.
A remarkable feature of this story is that while each section contains enough coherence to stand on its own, they are necessary to each other in order to get the bigge picture.
Fellow travelers -- one from heaven, one from earth and one from hell... very cool!