Review for Personal Stories :D

Personal Stories :D

(#) xxPanicFanxx 2011-10-24

Name: Alexis Sage Rae
Age: 15
Looks: Auburn hair down to her elbows, bright blue eyes, heart shaped face, curvy/skinny, pale, lip ring, her bangs cover her right eye most of the time.
Personality: Random, funny, loving, caring, doesn't trust people easily, mostly quiet until people get to know her, can't stand up for herself especially around guys, can manipulate guys easily and sometimes uses that to her advantage.
Genre: Romance/smut
Famous Person you want to be with(doesn't have to be the guys in MCR if you don't wanna): Frank (when he was 17)
Back Round Story(optional): Her parents died so she went to live with her aunt and uncle. They abuse her and her uncle and cousin raped her. She ran away from home.
what you want your story to be about: After she ran away from home she met Frank and after a while they became the best of friends. They're both secretly in love with eachother but won't admit it. They go to the beach and a bunch of guys start crowding around her trying to pull off her jacket and Frank beats them up. Then Frank finds out she cuts herelf. She threatens to kill herself because she has nothing to live for. He tells her he loves her and she tells him she loves him and then things get... well, yeah(insert smut at this point in time.)
anything else?: She cuts herself.