^(That took me about five minutes to decode that O.o) and I'd have to disagree with this person. I like the story the way it's paced now, that way you (the author) can keep on writing it with a lot of detail :)
And wow, how Gia has changed ! Before, she hated video games and the like, now she's playing those games, listening to music, etc. It's like watching someone bloom xD (that sounds so awkward!) I love love love x infinity this story !