Review for Best Party EVER!

Best Party EVER!

(#) Black_Poison_Heart 2011-11-05

WHOO!!! okay... after reading the first chapter (if it's not too late), i would like to submit my character :3

Name: Ashley Stalks (people call her 'Stalker' as a nick-name)

Age: 17

Type: Vampire :D

Appearance: Tanned (yes... a tanned Vampire), dyed black hair with ice-blue stipes and tips, cropped short but fringe (bangs) covers face. Grey eyes. a tattoo on her left arm, reading "Seeing is believing, the feeling is deciving. You know it's the truth when you find that you can't talk" in cursive/running writing from her shoulder to her wrist. Wears a lot of blue, black and fluro green clothes - pants (baggy, skinnies, ANYTHING) but not skirts or shorts. Any types of shirts and jumpers... again, daggy is fine. Ruby lips, not from blood of lipstick though. Thin, anorexic looking. Tall, close to 6 foot tall.

Personality: Witty, bitchy to haters and zero tollerence to those who can't keep up with her fast-paced mind. absolutly HATES cliches and predictable stuff and laughs and mocks it. If told to do something, she is less likely to do it. Is ready to get in a fight at any time, and high extreme-high pain tollerence. Acts tough, but cries easily (though able to hide it from most). Gets pissed when people say "asshole" instead of "arse"... an 'ass' is a donkey for Pete's sake!!!
Listens to metal and screamo. Eminem is the only rap she listens to. Alex Lloyd is the softest thing she listens to (mostly for her deceased bestie).

Background: From Australia. Managed to sneek on a plane and arrive to America. (PLEASE GIVE HER THE CLASIC AUSTRALIAN ACCENT!!!! I DON'T HAVE IT AND I SO WISH THAT THIS CHARACTER HAS IT!!!!!) Has no family - or she attacked the bitches after being turned into a vampire by her ex. Her family were mean, abusive and down-right arseholes. After possibly killing all of them (can't remember, it was 4 years ago when she used to have 'black-outs'), she went to her bestfriend's (name unknown). Ashley had another black-out, and finds herself drinking out of her now dead friend 0_o
In her memory, she got the tattoo, which is the bridge lyrics to Green by Alex Lloyd, her bestie's fave song. After wondering around Western Australia (the state) for a year and a half, eating kangaroos and the occasional person, she got to Perth (the captial city of Western Australia) and got on the plane to the states. Once there, just wondered around til she met Ray (is he in the fic? I'll check it out later... if he isn't, just say Frank) and befriended him, but no-one else knew. She has cut off any close emotional ties to people after her mysterious ex, and love no longer resides in her black heart - apart from her love of violence and her bestie.

howzat?