Review for I NEED HELP :)

I NEED HELP :)

(#) akeala1089 2011-11-05

For one night
half hidden
barely veiled
the face of reality
hidden behind
false identity
can't escape this
false reality

Well. Yup. That's what I got, I hope it can help in some way. XP

Author's response

yes it will help :) but i'm gonna add some more lyrics if that's okay with you :) can i get a character name? if u want to be in it that is :D