Review for A Bitter Betrayl

A Bitter Betrayl

(#) Shobs 2006-02-17

A beautiful poem. The only part I can think to critise is the repeated use of "ripped" in the last lines. It takes away from the effect, a bit.



Author\'s Response: Thank you haha I didn't even realize that I had done that. You are right. I changed it, it shouldnt sound so repeatitive now. thanks!