Review for Personal Stories:)

Personal Stories:)

(#) Vengefulscout 2011-11-10

Name – Emily Toye
Nickname – Ems, Em, E.T
Age –14
Looks – long brown hair, silver-blue eyes, 5'5, pale, cupids bow lips, no make-up
Personality – Shy, quiet, kind, self concious, caring and would die for her friends but can get easily offended, can cry VERY easily and will lash out at anyone who hurts her friends
Who You Want To Be With – Mikey!
What You Want Your Story To Be About – Emily is friends with the band and is going out with Mikey. Then she gets kidnapped and the band go to find her. She gets tortured and shit until the band come along and save her.

I hope that's okay and not too over the top :) You can change anything if you want! Happy Story Writing :D
Emily

PS: I know you already did me one and it was amazing :)