I'm feeling a bit weird now. Earlier I was like " I'd really like to read some highschool Frikey where Frank's popular and Mikey isn't." This delivers like nothing else. I always like when people write about how they used to be friends, but I think yours is better than most or all because you show how it truly affected Mikey. And Frank didn't even beat Mikey up, but it affected him enough that he would try to kill himself. I really like how Mikey's outburst is really truthful. He's all like," you really wanna know? Well I hate you!" That whole part is just amazing. I imagine that it really ate at Frank that Mikey would say that Frank was worse than those kids who hated him in elementary school. Those kids weren't traitors. And what Mikey said about wishing he never met Frank, I could really see how much it meant that Frank wasn't there for him anymore. And though Mikey hates what Frank turned into, his love is stronger than that and he can't help but hope that Frank goes back to being who he was before. They used to have it so good, why did you ruin it Frank??This is, without a doubt, my favorite highschool Frikey. Well done, and I just love the lat line and the ending over all.
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Author's response
Thank you very much! I love reading/writing high school frikey and I am glad that you enjoyed reading this (ridiculously long) one-shot as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thank you sooooo much for reading and reviewing - it means a lot to know that someone likes the crap I come up with! :)