Review for Forgotten Moon

Forgotten Moon

(#) confuzzld 2006-10-16

My only pointer is if you could like double space it would be easier to read , but otherwise I l-o-v-e it !
I really really like this . I love how you worded it ,and how it seemed to flow together so perfectly .
Like I said only complaint just please double space it or something so it is easier to read .

Please R&R my story in return . Thanks

Write on .

Confuzzld