That’s okaii, I personally do not think I could ever write a battle scene (Luckily I have never had to and hopefully the occasion will not arise any time soon)
Donnie Darko is a wonderful thing.
I am really liking this story and do not want you to end it, but if you feel like you must then you can. I don’t want you to be forcing an ending for it if your just not feeling it anymore. Maybe think about it for awhile before you actually give up on it though.