I LOVED IT! ADORED IT!
SO AMAZING!
... More? Now? PLEASEEE? I WANT MORE EDMUND ALONE TIME SOOOO BAD!!!!!
I loved the sarcastic remark, nice job your majesty and then running off... ahhh so wonderful.
And I totally felt the wanting feet on the ground thing, spot on!
You should totally make them reluctant to be together. I love this story!
Author's response
lol i'm glad you liked it.
Haha well i wanted him to seem crazier to...you. lol
And i should hope that i know that about you. you've only said that a thousand times.lol
Again i'm glad you like how it's going. but you'll just have to see if they (or you lol) even get together...
and aparently i can't not say 'lol'... lol