Review for You Can't Define Love

You Can't Define Love

(#) tortillachip 2011-11-20

This is so cute!! You rarely see an author that can write so many different types of stories. It's either cute or depressing or hot or whatever, but you don't really see an author that can write all types. So anyway, I like how Gerard is so confident in his answers and then Frank keeps questioning him. I can imagine real life Frank doing that, but not because he wants an answer, just because he wants to play around, and I can also imagine Frank in this story with his legs crossed and his hands clasped together and making that little "hm" sound in his throat to show that he's unsatisfied. I really like the idea of this story. It's very clever and interesting, and it really grabs the reader's attention. I also like the flow of the story. It doesn't jump from Frank asking what love is to Gerard kissing him and that's the end. Not that that would be a bad way to end the story, it just wouldn't tie in with how Gerard seem in this story, kinda shy, definitely not bold enough to make that big of a move on Frank. Also, that line about angering the nerds was funny. I can imagine Frank and Mikey running from the nerds and then the nerds and jocks make a plan to get revenge. Great job, as always.

Author's response

Thank you VERY much - I'm so glad that you liked it. The whole thing was kind of based of one of my Critical Thinking classes at school (apart from I questioned hope and there was no kissing involved)when we learnt about Socrates and how he philosophied back in Ancient Greece. I'm glad that you think it flowed well; I kinda wrote it as it came, so I wasn't too sure if it flowed right. Thank you soooo much for reviewing - it really means a lot! :)