Review for Personal Stories:)

Personal Stories:)

(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2011-11-20

Hi. I hope it's not too late to apply for a personal story - the one's you've done so far are really good and I kind of feel like I need something uplifting.

Name: Ellora Rose Sutton, or Ellie to my friends
Age: 14
Appearance: I'm quite tall for my age (around 5'8") and slim but not to the point of being skinny. I have wide brown eyes that often have bags underneath. My hair is naturally light blonde, goes to just below my shoulders and refuses to do as is told! I am quite pale, but blush bright red really easily. My outfit usually consists of black skinny jeans or shorts with tights underneath; a band t-shirt (Usually Green Day, Nirvana or Slipknot); my beloved black ankle-high Converse; black eyeliner; fingerless gloves and my recycled redbull can bracelet.I am known to spray red or blue streaks in my hair at the weekend.
Personality: I am painfully shy around my peers, but when with friends I am know to have moments where I can be outrageous and outspoken. I swear a little too much and hate any form of injustice, especially when directed towards any of my friends. I can be over-sensitive and quiet, unless someone hurts my friends. If someone hurts me I won't do anything or stick up for myself, but the second someone messes with my friends I go mental. I am a vegetarian and my favourite food is custard. I keep things bottled up, which usually results in an emotional explosion of epic proportions. My favourite bands include; The Used, Hawthorne Heights, Black Veil Brides, Green Day, Avenged Sevenfold and Sex Pistols. I love South Park, horror films, video games, mosh-pits and writing. I sing (including screamo), read, write and play Guitar Hero obsessively. I hate cats and being alone in the dark. I have been told that I can be a "typical blonde" at times even though everyone always pressures me to get A* at school.
Who I want to be with: Either Frank or Mikey.
Story: I'm kind of looking for comfort in this. My mum has cancer, something which I have actually been bullied about at school, and I was kinda hoping that you could do a story where Frank or Mikey basically tells me that everything will turn out alright.
Thanks for your time and good luck with your stories - keep up the good work! :)