Wow. This story was amazing and the fact that it was just a one-shot really shows your writing ability to create such a scene and a story with your words. I love reading your stories. They are excellent. I love Gerard's brotherly affection towards Mikey and how Mikey is so stressed over his parents, friends and trust. I don't know how you do it but every single one of your stories are unbelievable and I find no fault or misunderstanding in them. So really well done!
Author's response
Thank you very much - I'm glad that you like what I write! Thanks for such a sweet, lovely review - you've made me smile! :)