This was a really good chapter! I liked how it was just his train of thought, it was really simple and easy to follow too. Please update soon!
Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm glad that you liked it and that it was easy to follow. Sometimes I think/write stuff that my own mother doesn't understand, so I was kind of worried that it would be some incomprehensible wreck, but I'm very pleased that you've reassured me otherwise. Thank you sooo much for reviewing and I'll try to update ASAP (I try to update daily whenever possible). Thanks! :)