This again wasn't shitty at all. Get more confidence in your self,you really can write!! The describing was so good and Gerard is so pissing Frank off here xD. Hope you update soon.
Author's response
Thank you :D glad you liked it...I'm starting to really enjoy writing this (: thanks so much for taking the time to review all the chapters on this, btw...it means a lot (:
Will update soooooon :D
CosmicZombie xo