This really good! Much better than at least 70% of the stories on this site, because you seem like you're trying to make it story not just a random fiction about the band. xD UPDATE PLEASE!
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm happy that you liked it! I am trying to make it a story, whether I'm succeeding or not is a different matter entirely. I'm actually typing the next chapter up now, so give it an hour or two and it'll be up.
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)