I loved that story and I was wondering what in the world happened to it.
You are one of the authors on this site that has a grasp of the English language and knows how to properly use it.
I really hope that you continue this story soon. It was just plain awesome. What your boyfriend did was very immature.
Oh and if ever want to check over my work, feel welcome to. =D
Again, please continue that story. It's really awesome