I'm my review the can't wasn't supposed to be there. Also, I wanted to say that I loved that Frank was disgusted at Gerard for even thinking of going to work at a time like that. And when Gerard was yelling that he was a retard, it really clearly showed that he was angry with himself. I also really liked the paragraph with these lines in it. "Steady footsteps. Steady silence." It was so very clever to write that way and the rest of the lines made me feel some kind of hope that Mikey would get out and talk to Frank. This was so beautiful.
Author's response
Thank you very much for being so complimentary and for taking the time to leave another review; it's really made me smile! I'm extremely glad that you like it! Thanks for reviewing! :)