Gah! This was fantastic! I love your sensory details, they really bring you into the moment. And how was the best city in the whole fucking world? Oh. Er. Sorry, I mean, how was Seattle? x)
Author's response
That's what I think, too ;) Seattle is a fantastic place. Mostly because of the coffee (I am an actual real-life caffeine addict) and the beaches (I go tidepooling at Golden Gardens at night; it's wild). Thank you so much! I try to strike a balance between writing fast, since I don't really edit, and including enough detail that it still reads okay :) Hope you keep liking it!