"Ray would smell the fags. Ray would tell Mikey. Gerard would be in deep shit." XD
And they shall find out who Gerard's donor is. But first they shall get a leetle surprise mwahahahaha! I have no idea what I'm talking about. The story is so intensely tense it jumbled up the few brain cells I have left.
This is the best thing you've ever written. Period. Update soon.
SF