Every thing is what I like. It just uses a lot of great ideas some I have only seen in your stories or only in this story. Will we be meeting Hermione in this or the sequel Book II that is posted here?
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Look up the Meaning of Granger...
Sola is talking about Hermione in the last chapter. Though they don't know it yet
Book II is a the next book. I started it cause I have ideas that need to get the ideas down