I've just read the whole thing through and so far so good! It's really interesting so far, though as I already said - Gerard is a bitch. So, so far he is my favourite character! I keep on waiting for karma to come and kick his arse! I only have two complaints (and this is just me being picky so you know - feel free to ignore). One is that I think Mikey and Ray being together is weird. I know some people like it, but it just doesn't work for me. Yeah I'm being a bitch. Anyway - the other thing; chapters are too short!!! XD I want moooooorrrrree! So yeah. Other than that really great and hurry up karma!
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