I love this! You write really well, with lots of great details, and you seem capable of using grammar, which is even lovelier :) And good work on not making this sound stereotypical in the least. I'm excited to see what you come up with next, please update soon!
Author's response
Than you very much; I'm extremely glad that you liked it!
I'm English, so I don't really know what American high schools are like, but I'm relieved that you think I did alright with it and that it wasn't too stereotypical.
I'll try to update ASAP (homework permitting)!
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)