Well, that was a cliffhanger. And that was an understatement. I like this story, it's really exciting and keeps you interested. What's creepy is that "That kid wouldn’t ask for a glass of water if he was on fire! He’s just too nervous and scared of upsetting anyone for his own good." reminds me of me...
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm pleased that you thought it was exciting, not boring!
You should never be afraid to ask for help when you need it, because everyone has the right to declare that they're not okay.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review! :)