Whoa this chapter is just so brilliant. It is so well written. Mikey's last sentence completely caught me off guard. I don't want him to die! Please don't let him die Frankie. This story has me totally engrossed in it. Everyday I look forward to it! Ooooh I can't wait to see what Frankie thinks. Keep on updating please
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm extremely pleased that you thought this chapter was okay! I'm glad that you feel engrossed by the story, I was worried that it was getting kinda boring so it's a relief to know that you think otherwise!
I'll try to update later today, but it's my Nan's birthday weekend and probably end up getting dragged to to some sort of Christmas fair, so sorry if I don't manage an update today; I'll try my hardest!
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review, it really does help me write! :)