Review for Auditions for another new story!

Auditions for another new story!

(#) blood-stained-bandit 2011-12-10

I have two, mine is male, and my friends is female. they are
inseparable.

The others wolves in the pack
Full name: Jali Hoyepa
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Looks-split for details
Eye colour: big dark brown (almost black)
Hair: sandy blonde, fringe that falls into eyes.
Skin tone: slightly tanned.
Height/weight/body shape: height-6'4, weight - 80kg, body shape- thin, most of my body weight is muscles.
Hair colour and style: sandy blonde, short, with a fringe that falls into my eyes.
Clothes: ripped tatterd jeans, dirty leather jacket, no shoes or shirt.
Tattoos/piercings: snake bites,eye brow.
Anything else to do with looks: has three large scars across his back from a fight.
Likes: running, fighting, exploring places I haven't been before.
Dislikes: sitting still, silence, anyone trying to hurt Sarah,
Personality: jumpy, hyper active, short temper, generally happy and smiling, protective, loyal.
Music you dislike: 'pop', rap, techno.
Music you like: rock, punk, heavy metal.
What you look like when you are a wolf-stuff like colour of fur, size ECT: black fur, larger than most other wolves, eye's go completely black.
Do you like being a werewolf? Why?: yes I like being a werewolf, Sarah and I ran away together just before we were changed, it gave us the freedom we always wanted.
Were you born one or were you changed: changed.
If you were changed do you wish you were still a normal human? Why?: no, our lives were horrible when we were human.
How do you react in threatening/dangerous situations?: I make sure Sarah is okay, then help my pack to the best of my ability.

The others wolves in the pack
Full name: Sarah Johnstone
Age: 16
gender: female
Looks-split for details
Eye colour: pale grey-green
Hair: black, short and choppy.
Skin tone: pale white.
Height/weight/body shape: height - 4'9, weight 43kg, body shape - extremely thin, small, looks like she is about 12 and often get mistaken for a small child.
Hair colour and style: black, short and choppy, sidde fringe that covers a scar on her left cheek.
Clothes: dirty red skinnies, black leather jacket, misfis T-shirt, no shoes, wears a spiked dog collar as a joke.
Tattoos/piercings: nose and bottom lip peirced.
Likes: music, drawing, running, fighting, swimming, adreniline rushes.
Dislikes: anyone trying to hurt Jali (me) traitors,
Personality: extremely short temper, hyper active, laughs a lot, loyal, major mood swings.
Music you dislike: 'pop' rap, techno.
Music you like: rock, punk, heavy metal.
What you look like when you are a wolf-stuff like colour of fur, size ECT: pure white fur, smallish wolf, eye's go completely white.
Do you like being a werewolf? Why?" yes, for the same reason as Jali (me)
Were you born one or were you changed? : changed.
If you were changed do you wish you were still a normal human? Why?: no, for the same reason as Jali (me)
How do you react in threatening/dangerous situations? : makes sure Jali is ok, then helps her pack to the best of her ability



Sarah and I fight as a team, we work best when we are together, if we teamed together we would easily be able to take over the pack, but we don't want to, we're happy with the way things are.