I don't know where to start with this. This is absolutely, positively amazing! I don't know why almost every time you write that you think what you wrote is bad. It kinda bums me out a little because that means that you are a bit, a lot a bit crazy because everything you write is the complete and utter opposite. I always worry that my reviews don't come across as honest. I always worry if I've chosen the wrong words or if it is phrased in such a way that it'll seem like I'm commenting because I wanted to hear the sound of the keyboard clicks and there's no better way to hear that than by typing out a review to a fanfiction story. I bet they're pretty boring to read too. I really believe that what you write is beautiful and that you can write no wrong in my eyes. I wish that my reviews could express how much I love your writing, not just this story, but just about every one that you have up here. I can honestly say that I really truly and truly really LOVE this chapter, love this story, and love your writing. I hope you can see that. Now I shall leave another comment about the actual story because I don't want it to be too much too read if I squish it into one comment.
Author's response
Wow. Thank you; really, thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a genuinely touching review!
I always adore reading your reviews; they are never boring and I regard your opinion highly. They always help me to write, especially your reviews because of the amazingly thoughtful detail within them.
Thank you so sooooo sooooooooo SOOOOOO much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)