(#) HRT 2006-10-18
This was an interesting piece of writing. The mood you conjured up reminded me of one of Yui Miyamoto's pieces. I think you captured a poignant feeling that is a nice change from the way this couple is usually portrayed.
Author's response
Thank you. It's not really a pairing I care for and the genre isn't my strong suit, but it's a relief to know taht at least one person liked it.