Review for Auditions for another new story!

Auditions for another new story!

(#) detonationmouse 2011-12-13

I'm gunna audition one of my older brothers for this because you said you needed more hunters! Hope you like!
Full name: Cian O'Connor(pronounced 'Keen')
Age: 16
Looks-split for details
Eye colour: dark navy blue
Hair: chestnut brown hair-really shaggy with soem layers, he has his bangs over his eyes.
Skin tone: pale
Height/weight/body shape: 5"11, dunno what his weight is. . .
Clothes: black ripped skinny jeans, Transformers tee, emerald green converse, green beany, a colourful woven bracelet on his left hand, black leather fingerless gloves
Tattoos/piercings: none. He used to have a lip ring but these jerks at my school ripped it out.
Anything else to do with looks: He wears guyliner!
Likes:playing rhythm guitar, watching horror movies, learning Gaelic, sitting in abandoned places and drawing, listening to dubstep, track, doing crosswords, smoking
Dislikes: racist, homophobic, or stereotypical people, the color orange, snakes, cold places, school, fire
Personality: serious, kind of shy (like me, but not as much), dark humored,will stand up for people, very independent,smart,gets angry easily,more of a leader than a follower, kind to most people, when he gets angry there's no going back, he's a little hard to get along with at first but once you know his he'll stick with ya and be a good friend.
Music you dislike: pretty much same as my audition.
Music you like: same as my audition except Sleeping with Sirens, also System of A Down, Slipknot,
Why are you a werewolf hunter?: His sister (me, Alisha), was changed by her own will, and she (me again) ran away.. So he's trying to find her. He doesn't want to kill her, only find her. . They had a kind of a bad relationship so that's why she ran away.
Are you a skilled hunter or are you new to it?: new
How did you become a hunter?: Read 'Why are you a werewolf hunter?', he doesn't really know how he joined. . he just did.
Do you enjoy killing the werewolves?: Not really, because he knows his sister is one, but he has to keep his cover. He's okay with it.