Review for Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

(#) tortillachip 2011-12-14

This is marvelous! I used that word because it seems like the word amazing is starting to lose it's meaning, and I most definitely mean when I say how great this is. Anyway, I really like this chapter. It's so well written and beautiful. You can really tell that Gerard wants to be a good brother. He's determined to do it right this time, not let Mikey get away again, but it's happened and Mikey is in the hospital and all he can do is hold his hand and hope he's okay. Even if he isn't Gerard will still love Mikey. Love him the way he wants and needs to br love. The way that Frank said Mikey needed to be loved. I love how Gerard hears a bit of guilt in Franks voice, wonders about it for all of a second, and then just goes back to hoping Mikey's okay and wanting Frank to come soon. He hasn't a clue what happened between Frank and Mikey so he didn't have a reason to think of why Frank sounded guilty. Maybe he just mistook Frank's tone to be one of guilt when it was really shock or sadness. Or maybe he didn't. He knows what guilt sounds like, his voice has had the same tone many times before. I don't know, but I really wanna find out. I hope this makes sense. I bet Gerard is like " I always disliked buses, but now I hate them. They hurt my Mikey. My baby brother Mikey." I can imagine Gerard saying that. Well, this is fabulous. It's well written and has strong emotion and it's just beautiful. I love it. Great job.

Author's response

Thank you VERY much; your reviews are always so kind and lovely and detailed an I love them!
Yeah, I can imagine Gerard saying that too!
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such an awesomely nice review; you've made me smile! :)